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	<title>Comments on: 10 Signs to Know if You&#8217;re Reading a Strong Script</title>
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		<title>By: Karen J Lloyd</title>
		<link>http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/2007/12/10/10-signs-to-know-if-youre-reading-a-strong-script/comment-page-1/#comment-48148</link>
		<dc:creator>Karen J Lloyd</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 18:59:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Christina and welcome!

It&#039;s great to have some screenwriters visiting too. Yay! That&#039;s a great idea to storyboard your own scripts. More writers should try that even just as an exercise.

Poke around in the Archives and pick away at what little of my brain is left these days. ;)

~K</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Christina and welcome!</p>
<p>It&#8217;s great to have some screenwriters visiting too. Yay! That&#8217;s a great idea to storyboard your own scripts. More writers should try that even just as an exercise.</p>
<p>Poke around in the Archives and pick away at what little of my brain is left these days. <img src=\'http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif\' alt=\';)\' class=\'wp-smiley\' /> </p>
<p>~K</p>
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		<title>By: Christina</title>
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		<dc:creator>Christina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 18:24:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Karen,
I&#039;m really happy to have found your site. I&#039;m a screenwriter and have really been wanting to storyboard my own scripts. I&#039;m looking forward to picking your brain.
Cheers,
Christina</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Karen,<br />
I&#8217;m really happy to have found your site. I&#8217;m a screenwriter and have really been wanting to storyboard my own scripts. I&#8217;m looking forward to picking your brain.<br />
Cheers,<br />
Christina</p>
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		<title>By: Karen J Lloyd</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen J Lloyd</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 09:02:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re welcome kennytan. I hope you pick up some useful tips. :)

K</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re welcome kennytan. I hope you pick up some useful tips. <img src=\'http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif\' alt=\':)\' class=\'wp-smiley\' /> </p>
<p>K</p>
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		<title>By: kennytan</title>
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		<dc:creator>kennytan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 14:33:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi
thnx for this board,just what i need to learn
I been an indie who did everything from music to mv
My 1st mv been posted at 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K6t_mzdnLIs
I&#039;t sung in thai language but i think it may have foreigners giggle a little or even laugh.
If you have time please check it out and comment
thnx
L</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi<br />
thnx for this board,just what i need to learn<br />
I been an indie who did everything from music to mv<br />
My 1st mv been posted at<br />
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K6t_mzdnLIs" rel="nofollow">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K6t_mzdnLIs</a><br />
I&#8217;t sung in thai language but i think it may have foreigners giggle a little or even laugh.<br />
If you have time please check it out and comment<br />
thnx<br />
L</p>
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		<title>By: Karen J Lloyd</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen J Lloyd</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Aug 2009 04:22:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Eesh. That script sounds like a mess!

I guess the first question would be, &quot;Do they have any money?&quot; (Yes, I can be shallow like that.) Are you SURE you&#039;d get paid? If you&#039;re not sure, I&#039;d stay away from it myself. No brainer there.

If there is money and you *will* get it, then I&#039;d do this: ask them how they feel about the script and if you have any freedom with it (and how much). If they come across as &#039;in love with it&#039; and won&#039;t change anything, then you could forget it or take the money and do the best you can with it. 

When presented with crap, I just have the attitude that I did the best job *I* could do and that I didn&#039;t write the thing. Just like how actors take on crappy roles for the money or experience. They know it&#039;s a cheesy movie but do the best they can with what they&#039;re given. 

It&#039;s not your responsibility to overhaul their script or even tell them it stinks. You can point out where things aren&#039;t clear for you and suggest a few things to improve it, but after that I&#039;d leave it.

If it&#039;s worth the trouble and you are getting paid, then do it. If not, then consider passing on this one. 

My humble 2 cents. :)
K</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Eesh. That script sounds like a mess!</p>
<p>I guess the first question would be, &#8220;Do they have any money?&#8221; (Yes, I can be shallow like that.) Are you SURE you&#8217;d get paid? If you&#8217;re not sure, I&#8217;d stay away from it myself. No brainer there.</p>
<p>If there is money and you *will* get it, then I&#8217;d do this: ask them how they feel about the script and if you have any freedom with it (and how much). If they come across as &#8216;in love with it&#8217; and won&#8217;t change anything, then you could forget it or take the money and do the best you can with it. </p>
<p>When presented with crap, I just have the attitude that I did the best job *I* could do and that I didn&#8217;t write the thing. Just like how actors take on crappy roles for the money or experience. They know it&#8217;s a cheesy movie but do the best they can with what they&#8217;re given. </p>
<p>It&#8217;s not your responsibility to overhaul their script or even tell them it stinks. You can point out where things aren&#8217;t clear for you and suggest a few things to improve it, but after that I&#8217;d leave it.</p>
<p>If it&#8217;s worth the trouble and you are getting paid, then do it. If not, then consider passing on this one. </p>
<p>My humble 2 cents. <img src=\'http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif\' alt=\':)\' class=\'wp-smiley\' /><br />
K</p>
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		<title>By: Sharon A.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sharon A.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Aug 2009 22:45:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Karen,

Let me first say, it&#039;s a movie that has a chance at making it production. 

And I pretty much agree with you about not being able to pick and choose. I mean, I&#039;ve worked with bad scripts before just fine and it wasn&#039;t a problem for. Thanks to imagination, my liking of drawing and the fact there were actual descriptions of scene and characters. With this one, it&#039;s absolutely no character description and no real setting and the dialog isn&#039;t much help because everybody talks a like. Now, dialog isn&#039;t an issue for me, because that&#039;s not what I&#039;m boarding. But, it seems more like I&#039;m reading notes instead of an actual script.

And the deal, right now, there is no contract at this point. I haven&#039;t agreed to anything, yet.

Maybe, what I really should have asked  was how do you tell people that their script, idk, needs a little work without coming off as a snooty tooty? lol.

I don&#039;t want to take over nor do I just want to leave &#039;em hangin&#039; with a bad script. You know?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Karen,</p>
<p>Let me first say, it&#8217;s a movie that has a chance at making it production. </p>
<p>And I pretty much agree with you about not being able to pick and choose. I mean, I&#8217;ve worked with bad scripts before just fine and it wasn&#8217;t a problem for. Thanks to imagination, my liking of drawing and the fact there were actual descriptions of scene and characters. With this one, it&#8217;s absolutely no character description and no real setting and the dialog isn&#8217;t much help because everybody talks a like. Now, dialog isn&#8217;t an issue for me, because that&#8217;s not what I&#8217;m boarding. But, it seems more like I&#8217;m reading notes instead of an actual script.</p>
<p>And the deal, right now, there is no contract at this point. I haven&#8217;t agreed to anything, yet.</p>
<p>Maybe, what I really should have asked  was how do you tell people that their script, idk, needs a little work without coming off as a snooty tooty? lol.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t want to take over nor do I just want to leave &#8216;em hangin&#8217; with a bad script. You know?</p>
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		<title>By: Karen J Lloyd</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen J Lloyd</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Aug 2009 03:35:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Sharon!

Well, I guess there could be such thing. A script can always be fixed...but if it&#039;s THAT bad, it would have to be on the writer&#039;s end. A storyboard artist can only do so much. And someone has already approved the thing if it got to the storyboard stage, so you really couldn&#039;t do an overhaul without permission anyway.

If you get a bad script and they tell you not to change anything and it stinks, you can suck it up and make the best of it. 

Or yes, of course you can always turn down a job. But if you are on a contract for 6 shows and you just don&#039;t like one of the scripts, I would say no. You can&#039;t just refuse that one and pick and choose the best ones. In animation they are on a schedule and you have to take what you&#039;re given.  You&#039;d just have to make the best of it.

But if it&#039;s an independent project and the script is horrible, use your best judgment. Do you want to spend all that time on it if it stinks?

Hope this helps a bit. :)
K</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Sharon!</p>
<p>Well, I guess there could be such thing. A script can always be fixed&#8230;but if it&#8217;s THAT bad, it would have to be on the writer&#8217;s end. A storyboard artist can only do so much. And someone has already approved the thing if it got to the storyboard stage, so you really couldn&#8217;t do an overhaul without permission anyway.</p>
<p>If you get a bad script and they tell you not to change anything and it stinks, you can suck it up and make the best of it. </p>
<p>Or yes, of course you can always turn down a job. But if you are on a contract for 6 shows and you just don&#8217;t like one of the scripts, I would say no. You can&#8217;t just refuse that one and pick and choose the best ones. In animation they are on a schedule and you have to take what you&#8217;re given.  You&#8217;d just have to make the best of it.</p>
<p>But if it&#8217;s an independent project and the script is horrible, use your best judgment. Do you want to spend all that time on it if it stinks?</p>
<p>Hope this helps a bit. <img src=\'http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif\' alt=\':)\' class=\'wp-smiley\' /><br />
K</p>
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		<title>By: Sharon A.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sharon A.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Aug 2009 19:00:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello Karen,

First and foremost, I have to thank you for the advice you&#039;ve given me about an animation gig. I don&#039;t know if you remember. But, I just wanted to say thanks for that.

My question is, as a storyboard artist, is there a such a thing as a script that just can&#039;t be &#039;fixed&#039;? And is it okay to turn down a job because of the script?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Karen,</p>
<p>First and foremost, I have to thank you for the advice you&#8217;ve given me about an animation gig. I don&#8217;t know if you remember. But, I just wanted to say thanks for that.</p>
<p>My question is, as a storyboard artist, is there a such a thing as a script that just can&#8217;t be &#8216;fixed&#8217;? And is it okay to turn down a job because of the script?</p>
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		<title>By: Karen J Lloyd</title>
		<link>http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/2007/12/10/10-signs-to-know-if-youre-reading-a-strong-script/comment-page-1/#comment-37932</link>
		<dc:creator>Karen J Lloyd</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Aug 2009 17:17:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Soh Fia and welcome!

I&#039;m glad you found it too. Poke around in the &lt;a href=&quot;http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/archives/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Archives&lt;/a&gt; and enjoy. If you ever have any questions, just ask. :)

K</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Soh Fia and welcome!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m glad you found it too. Poke around in the <a href="http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/archives/" rel="nofollow">Archives</a> and enjoy. If you ever have any questions, just ask. <img src=\'http://karenjlloyd.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif\' alt=\':)\' class=\'wp-smiley\' /> </p>
<p>K</p>
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		<title>By: Soh Fia</title>
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		<dc:creator>Soh Fia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Aug 2009 09:33:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi!

I&#039;m really glad to have found your blog, its so helpful especially since i&#039;m doing storyboarding and video production classes right now, its great to get insights and learn from people and places beyond my classroom. Thanks again! 

soh fia</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m really glad to have found your blog, its so helpful especially since i&#8217;m doing storyboarding and video production classes right now, its great to get insights and learn from people and places beyond my classroom. Thanks again! </p>
<p>soh fia</p>
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